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Goten and Trunks prt 1:Truth by ~CantTakeU:iconCantTakeU:





"Why do you always do this to me Trunks," says Goten screaming at the top of his lungs.
"Well Goten its 'cause I’m older than you and I’m always right, you have to understand that I’m fourteen and your still only thirteen,” says Trunks with a cocky attitude.
"It still doesn't matter when were playing a game and then you just take it upon yourself to change the rules, I may still only be thirteen, but I'm not stupid ya know."
Now the two have begun getting older they have been having these little spats about every little thing that they have a disagreement about, and as we know when two sayjinns start fighting, they fight until there point is loud and clear.
"Well Goten, if you feel that way about me then why do you even still talk to me, if you don't like me as a friend any more why are you still here."
Goten just stands there why’ll listening to the words coming out of Trunks mouth and after he is done he drops a tear to the ground and with a lower, sadder, and unangrey voice,” Well Trunks, if you want me to go away, I guess that your gonna get your wish," the moment the finishes his last syllable he flies off in the distance towards his house.
"Goten wait," says Trunks turning around to late to see that he is gone, "Oh great what have I done now, I've got to go talk to him," Trunks sighs and flies after Goten towards his house.

A few moments later Trunks lands outside of Goten's house and walks up to the door, before knocking he says to him self,” well it's now or never," with that said Trunks walks the rest of the distance to the door and knocks three times and waits for an answer.
The door opens and Gokuh is at the door, "Hi Trunks, did something happen? Goten came home pretty upset."
"Ohh, he did, well don't worry I'll handle it," in a nervous voice he says," is he in his room then?"
Gokuh senses that there is something wrong and something has just happened between them so Gokuh answers.” Yes he is in his room, just knock and tell him that it's you, come and get me if there are any problems."
Trunks nods and walks over to Goten's room and knocks twice, there is no answer so he knocks again three times, "Goten its Trunks we have to talk, please let me in."
Goten responds,” Trunks why are you even here, you told me that you don't want to be around you, you told me that I was just a nascence."
Trunks, a little aggravated that he is talking to Goten from outside a door says, “Goten you have to let me in, I really need to talk to you."
"Fine Trunks come in, it's open anyway."

Trunks walks in and sees Goten sitting in a ball facing away from the door and he is sniffling as if he was just crying, Trunks sits down and the bed and begins talking to him," I really think I need to tell you how I really fe--," was all that he could get out before Goten sat up and put a finger on his lips.
"Trunks I think I need to talk first, just listen to me for once without interrupting halfway through, ok?"
Trunks just nods and sits there waiting for Goten to tell him what he needs to know.
Goten begins to speak,” Trunks I need to let you know how I feel about you, when ever I’m around you lately I get butterflies in my stomach, it is harder for me to say normal stuff to you every time I’m around you, I just want to let you know that you are really, really special to me and I never want to lose you."
By now Trunks is holding back what he wants to say to Goten respecting his wish and letting Goten continue.
"I know were only just becoming teenagers, I really think I am drawn towards you in a way that I haven’t in any other way towards any one else."
Trunks has finally had enough, “Goten I feel exactly the same way but I thought that you didn't feel the same way, I want to give you something, but I’m not really sure that you will want it, I really like you Goten, I can't describe it either, when I'm around you I just feel so good, and it just feels so right."
Goten has a expression of shock on his face and says,” how could we have gone so long with out telling each other, I mean if we felt this way, what didn't we just tell each oth--,"was all that he could get out before Trunks comes over and kisses him on the lips for a mere two seconds.
Goten is in a state of disbelife, "Trunks what was that for?"
"It was what I've been wanting to give you."
©2006-2009 ~CantTakeU
:iconcanttakeu:

Author's Comments

This is the first of a many chapter story about Goten and Trunks from DBZ (Dragon ball Z), after they have become teens now and coming to terms with each other.

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:iconkanjiookami:
This is really good! Im not a huge Dragonball fan but you can deffinatly draw anime! :+fav:

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:iconkanjiookami:
I didnt see the fanfic part! ^^; Sorry! Its really good though, keep writing!!

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:iconkanjiookami:
You could also use some work on the words `says`. When I read the first part thats all I saw!

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:iconcanttakeu:
Well what do you mean by that, what should I do?
:iconkanjiookami:
Like on the first sentence it says, "Why do you always do this to me Trunks," says Goten screaming at the top of his lungs.


You stated to types of ways of Goten saying something, Instead it should be something like,
"Why do you always do this to me Trunks," Goten screamed at the top of his lungs.
That way hes not screaming and saying. But thats my opinion.

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:iconcanttakeu:
ahh i get it but then to me it doesnt make sense
:iconkanjiookami:
Well then write how you write :)

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:icongreendragon737:
Aawwww I really like the ending ^_^

It's very good :)
:icontootsies:
Aww. Cute..
My Big Brother used to watch Dragon Ball! lol.. when he was a kid though..
How old are you? lol..
hehe..
Well .. great job..
TC.

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:iconcanttakeu:
Well I am 14 now....so I guess I still Like the show in the Goten and Trunks sense :P

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